First essay
FIRST ESSAY : Chronological order
How to take care of environmentDo you really feel okay with the big percentage of pollution?.The pollution around the world has 99% of damage.However, no one tryes to change these problem.For example, there are:skin cancer for the hard sun irradiation , lung cancer that is produced for air contamination, damage for the eyes because the contaminated air hurts the retina.Nonetheless,for this seriously problem there are at least three efficient steps to overcome the pollution:recycle,save energy and water.
First of all,a good and easy step is recylcing inorganic
products.A good advise is that we should use both faces of a paper and
then sell it to a company of recycle.Furthermore,the paper is not the
only thing to recicly but also plastic bottles , plastic bags,
batteries , cartons and others.Second,to make well this step is
necessary to select the garbage in two ways:organic and
inorganic.Indeed,recycle is the first step to take care of our
environment.
Second of all, the next step is saving energy to reduce
pollution.In the recent years some investigators said, "Is necessary
and important that people could walk or ride a bike instead of drive a
car."I totally agree with this information because a car produces a lot
of pollution in the air of our society.Furthermore,sometimes people
forget to turn off the lights and it increases the loss of energy,so do
not forget to do it an also electronic machines.In summary,there are
some forms to save energy and reduce contamination.
Last,the third step to ake care of our environment is saving
water.First,the most common problem is when we do not close the faucet
of the shower,in this case is excellent to close the faucet when we are
soaping our body.Furthermore,doing this activitie we could save water
(20 liters).Another form is using less chemical products cause the
majority of them waste water , time and contaminate.To sum up, nowadays
we have to follow this forms to save water for next generations
In conclusion,we still have hope to save our planet.Basides,there
are more steps or forms to do it.I think that if we follos these steps
the human lieneration will have a quality of life.
Harumi, I think this is a beautiful article and it is easy to understand since you focuss on the topics (recycle, save enrgy and water) that were described in the introductory paragraph and you don`t go elsewhere with your body paragraphs. I think that it is what really counts to make a good essay.
ResponderEliminarJimmy Deza
Haru =)my dear friend.! your essay is so interesting and I think that people should follw your steps.! .Also i agree with you when you said that we should follow the last steps to save water for next generation .!
ResponderEliminar..Elizabeth Camposano..!
I liked it, really because you are promoting the health for our planet, I only found one mistake in the conclusion paragraph: It says ''follo'' instead of ''follow'', anyway It's a nice essay. Congrats!!
ResponderEliminarHi Harumi! I really like your essay because I consider my self as a "green" person. You´re right when you say that there are many ways to help the enviroment. I also think that people have no excuses to say that they don´t know how to help the enviroment. Plus, it´s important to spread what we know to our friends.
ResponderEliminarSusan Román